mystymizer wrote:Er...I liked the concept within itself (as in the story being told).
I am just curious as to why you believed formatting and schemes were unnecessary? Punctuation and other grammar YES'...why are they not relevant? I think simple revision should be done on this piece by adding in commas, periods, capitals, etc. because it gives the story much more hold. Right now it is just confusing and more of a blurred tale.
all of my writings have a secret story to them... a second message to be told.
I leave such constrictions as punctuation so that the reader will be able to realize them.
I've ceased this practice because the only ones who ever find the hidden stories are very few and far between.
I wish young people were more insightful then they'd realize what I am trying to teach them.
I don't write to waste peoples time, I write to teach them. It's not my fault that people won't learn.
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